After reading the hook I am left confused. I don’t think this is a good hook at all because I am not interested in reading about the authors grandmother and her stories. Especially because it says the mid-1920s, this is extremely boring to me. The conclusion is written to try and convince people that just [...]
Entries from February 2009
Stop me
February 11th, 2009 · No Comments
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Showing sentences
February 6th, 2009 · No Comments
1. Swirling and swirling the ocean was. I looked and thought oh no a hurricane, we are all going to die, but then I thought about it and I realized that the way the ocean swirled and the way the wind blew so hard, was kind of a awesome sight.
2. Drool covered half of the [...]
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Tommrow
February 4th, 2009 · No Comments
How does Rittenberg hook the reader? What’s happening?
He hooks me as a reader by connecting his age with mine. When he said his game it kind out sucked me in and made me want to read on.
What specifics does Rittenberg use to emphasize how older generations saw horrible things in their lifetimes?
He talked about the [...]
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Second Post
February 4th, 2009 · No Comments
T. Susan Chang wrote about how she felt about the world being digital. She says that she was sucked into it when she got a computer in college. She says from then on she became more and more engaged in the digital world. Although all this digitalization is happening she says she likes to keep [...]
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First Post
February 2nd, 2009 · No Comments
I am a strong writer when I am in the mood. If I get in the groove when Im writing it’s hard for me to stop. But it is hard to find me in that groove, most of the time I sit down to write and I just can’t think of what to write. Last [...]
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February 2nd, 2009 · 1 Comment
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